Sample medical school personal statement: Neuroscience

I moved to the United States from Vietnam at the very young age of 13. I found it difficult to adjust to the total change in language, environment, and culture. As an introvert, it was really difficult for me to socialize with my peers, but being in a place where I couldn’t even speak the language fluently made it even harder. However, I did not let these drawbacks get me down. I struggled and persevered to learn English and gradually made new friends.

Even as I was finding it difficult to adjust, I was more worried for my own sister who has Asperger’s syndrome. Most people don’t understand her condition and they take offense when she responds differently to various situations. I have seen many people cringe and look at her with disgust when she does something that doesn’t conform to social norms. Living with my sister has greatly influenced my decision to take up psychology as my undergraduate program. I wanted to reach out to the people who have psychological disorders and help them and their family members deal with the circumstances. I chose ______ University’s psychology program because the school offers a strong foundation in the field of science. I was also given the chance to focus on research and experience hands-on training in various local hospitals. The experience I got has taught me much and it was then that I decided to pursue a medical degree and then specialize in either neurology or neurosurgery.

In my exposure when I do volunteer work in hospitals, I have seen some young doctors disregard the importance of patients who do not appear rich or have trouble speaking English. I feel disheartened that I could not give the medical assistance these people need. I believe that each patient should be treated as an individual with special needs, especially those who need the help of doctors. Having grown up with a sister who’s often misunderstood by society, I know how much it hurts to be brushed off or treated with disgust. I can still remember the taunts I got for not being able to speak English well when we first moved here. I’m glad that I have learned from this experience and am now using this invaluable insight in my dealing with all kinds of people.

I am hardworking, eager to learn, and passionate about helping individuals. The thought processes of people and how the brain works has always fascinated and intrigued me. I intend to pursue a medical degree and a specialization in neurosciences as these will surely put me a step closer to my goal of helping those who are struggling with neurological disorders. I believe that my research and problem solving skills, as well as my empathy, perseverance, and strong work ethic can make me a successful medical student and doctor someday. I hope to pursue this goal at ________ University while intending to contribute positively to and learn from the rest of the medical student body.

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