Healthcare industry MBA admission essay outline and excerpt

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MBA Essay outline:

I.  Introduction

A.  I have reached a turning point in life where my decisions and their results can have a life-changing impact
B.  For some time now, I have worked for a Hong Kong-based private healthcare services company
C.  Now, I want to reach higher aspirations and goals.
D.  I turn my attention toward greater achievements, such as helping make progress in healhcare reform.
E.  This is why I seek an ______ MBA education.

II.  My education and career experience

A.  I took up Food Nutrition & Health in college in Canada.
B.  I majored in Nutritional Sciences.
C.  After earning my degree, I sought accreditation as a nutritionist under the Hong Kong Nutrition Association.
D.  After gaining accreditation, I started working with a private healthcare company, mainly dealing with medical benefit schemes for corporate companies.
E.  I’ve seen how healthcare systems are in Canada as a college student, in Hong Kong as an accredited professional, and hopefully in the US through my MBA schooling.

III.  How my experiences have helped to develop personality and character

A.  I believe that there is a deep connection between what and how we eat, and our nature as spiritual beings.
B.  The food that nurtures our bodies, gives us the fuel we need to pursue happiness and fulfillment in life.
C.  This is the realization that truly made me want to enter into the food and nutrition aspect of healthcare.
D.  This is also my main cause for wanting to contribute to healthcare system reforms, to make life better for people in any way I can, even if it’s as simple as advising them on their diets.
Essay excerpt:

I am in an important stage in my life — one that could possibly have a life-changing impact on me.  After having worked about one and a half year with a private healthcare services company in Hong Kong, I feel obliged and driven to pursue greater goals and aspirations.  I want to reach a higher level of learning, understanding, and experience in the field of healthcare services so that I may have the opportunity to contribute to the progress of healthcare system reformation.  This is why I am seeking out an education under the MBA program of _______________.

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